Saturday, October 19, 2013

Welcome to Taiwan

                                                                                    
                                                                             
                               Welcome to Taiwan (preparation outline)


Specific Purpose: To inform my audience about Taiwan from three aspects.
                 
INTRODUCTION
      I.    When I was young, I mean at your age. My dream was to travel all
                around the world. So far, I've visited about 50 countries. Don’t make
                your assumption too soon. No, I am not rich. It’s only because my
                husband worked with United Airlines for many years, so I get to fly for
                a much cheaper price than you.
      II.   Which country I love the best besides the US? Taiwan of course.
      III. I think no one knows Taiwan better than me in this room including Mr.
               Heislar. so I’m going to introduce Taiwan to you from three aspects.
                  
               A. First, a general description of Taiwan  
               B. Second, where you can visit in Taiwan
               C. and third, food.
BODY
      I.    Let’s start by looking at a general description of Taiwan.
               A.  Who named Taiwan “Formosa?” Where is Taiwan located and
                     how big is Taiwan?
                        1. Taiwan was named Formosa by Portugal in 1590. It means       
                            beautiful island.  
                        2. It is located on the west of the Pacific Ocean.
                        3. It is 36,000 sq km. I see some of you look puzzled. Let me
                            say it another way. California is 11 times larger than Taiwan.
              
               B.  There is some unique geography you can see in Taiwan.
                        1. Taiwan has the largest number and density of high mountains
                            in the world.
                                 
                                a.  2/3 of the land is covered by mountains and foothills.  
                                b.  There are 286 mountains more than 3000 meters high
                                     (9850 feet.)
                                                                                                                             
                        2. Taiwan has one of the highest concentrations (more than 100
                            hot springs) and greatest variety of thermal springs in the
                            world varying from hot springs to cold springs, mud springs,
                            and seabed hot springs.
                                a. Taiwan is part of the collision zone between the Yangtze
                                             Plate and Philippine Sea Plate so Taiwan has evolved a
                                    unique environment that produces high-temperature
                                    springs with crystal-clear water, usually both clean and
                                    safe to drink.
                                b. These hot springs are not only clean and potable but also
                                    commonly used for spas and resorts.  
              C.  You can experience four seasons in a day.
                        1.  Tropic of cancer runs through south Taiwan. It’ll take you
                             one and a half hours from north to south by high speed train to
                             enjoy the tropical weather.
                        2.  Driving up to the mountain, you’ll experience the summer,
                             spring, fall, and winter. There are not many places in the
                             world that can give you four seasons in a day including a
                             wonderful spa in hot springs.
(Transition: After a general description of Taiwan,)
   II.   I would like to go on to my second main point. Where you can
             visit in Taiwan.
               
            A.  It is 6434 miles from San Francisco to Taiwan.   
                        1. The flight will take 11-14 hours depending on the winds. 
The picture shows Los Angeles, it's the best I could find.
                        
                        2.  There are so many places to visit, but I don’t have enough
                             time to show you. So I called Taiwan Tourist office in San
                             Francisco. They were very helpful and sent me this package. 
There are three brochures that I put in the envelope. You can 
take one later.
                                  
              
            B.   I’ll just briefly show you some pictures (What’s in this box?        
                  Well, something better. Later…)
                        1. Fort San Domingo
Taiwan has been influenced by other countries. For
                            example, the Dutch occupied Taiwan from 1624-1661. Here
                            in Dan Shuei, you’ll see a Dutch fort. I love this small town
                            very much because I went to college here.
The sunset is very famous at Fishermen's Wharf in Dan Shuei.


                        2.  National Palace Museum:
Republic of China (ROC) is the official name of Taiwan.
                            After the ROC lost its mainland China territory in the Chinese  
                            Civil War and fled to Taiwan in 1949. They moved the best         
                            quality collection of Chinese art which was in the museum 
in Beijing. It’s very worthwhile to pay a visit if you are 
interested in Chinese art.
                     
                        3. Taipei 101, the tallest building in the world before 2010, 1. 4.
                            The elevator takes 37 seconds from the 5th floor to the 89th
                            floor. 1010 meters, 3313 feet per minutes.  It is the fastest in
                            the world.
                        4.  Hot springs
                        5.  Cliff by the Pacific Ocean.
                        6.  Tropical beach
                        
        (Transition: I’ll finish the sight seeing tour here. You’ll find a lot more
         interesting places in the brochures. Let’s move on to my third point. )  
  III.    For all my Taiwanese friends here, what we miss the most of Taiwan
           is the food. Taiwanese love to eat. Just about every small town has a
           food specialty. For example


           A. Night market is one of the places where people hang out and have a
                late night snack. Most streets in Taiwan are busy until late at night
                around 1 or 2 o’clock.
    B. Oyster pancake. The oyster is very small and fresh. I've never
                found them here.
           C. Stinky tofu. You either love it or hate it, like Limburger cheese.
I've never learned to like Limburger cheese but my husband loves 
stinky tofu
                  


                        
           D. And this. Pineapple cake. It is the No.1 snack in Taiwan. I was
                thinking to buy some and then, I decided to make them special for
                you. Here is how I made.
http://peanut757767.blogspot.com/2013/09/pineapple-cake.html
                1. At first, I tried to use the blender and the food processor, but it
                    was a failure.
                2. I had to slice the pineapple by hand.
                3. Here are the ingredients.
                4. I baked them yesterday.
                5. Here they are.
                6. I wrote down the ingredients just in case if you are allergic to
                    something. Don’t forget to take one before you leave. 
                    
                        
CONCLUSION
      I.    I hope I did a good job introducing Taiwan by

               A.  a general description of Taiwan

                        Let me ask you a question.
                        How many times larger is California than Taiwan?
               B.  where you can visit in Taiwan
                        Hopefully with the brochures, you can get a better idea.
               C.  food in Taiwan
                        The pineapple cake is good to eat with a cup of tea.
                        Enjoy it.

     
        II.   Taiwanese are very friendly, and Taiwan is a very safe place to visit. I
               hope in the future when you plan your vacation, you can think about
               going there. If you have only 7-8 hours to transfer, I have a brochure
               showing you a free half day tour from the airport. You’ll experience a


               new way of life. I sincerely welcome you to Taiwan.












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65 comments:

  1. Very good introduction, a few grammatical errorsㄝbut no harm to your piece.
    Nice job!

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    1. 可以指出我的errors嗎? Please~
      我下禮拜三要用

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    2. 好什麼?我什麼也沒改,快告訴我哪裡

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    3. 他英文比我好 他說ok就可以了

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    4. 他英語比你好,英文...不見得
      譬如說我把三年前的文章修改之後放上來
      那些文章三年前他說OK的
      你知道我修改的幅度有多....大嗎?
      且不論段落之間轉折的生硬~好些文法錯了他都沒看到
      你如果算朋友的話,要告訴我我錯在哪裡

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    5. 他只是沒用心,非不懂。

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    6. 你說的對,我每次都只能利用廣告時間問他

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    7. 下次跟他說 你一定不愛我

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    8. 阿哈!說了就不像我了

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    9. 那下次跟他說 你一定很愛我

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    10. I say that a lot. He always answers, "Sure I do."
      不管用啦

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    11. 拐到手就沒價值了 跟新車開出dealer一樣

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    12. 呵呵 秀秀妳

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    13. 我又沒拐到手

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    14. mick拐到了啊

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    15. 原來這是你的婚姻觀

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    16. 是現實生活

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    17. 我這篇outline拿到9.5/10
      speech拿到41/45
      ^ _ ^

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    18. ^ _ ^

      我把圖PO出來了,去看

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    19. 幸好沒去 ~_~

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    20. 善變,又不喜歡鯉魚門了喔

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    21. 看你po的蠻難吃的

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    22. 哈~我妹都點她老公和兒子愛吃的

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    23. 果然是老外

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    24. 果然lose her dignity.

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    25. This comment has been removed by the author.

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    26. OK, let me tell you one of the answers after 9 years:

      "After the ROC lost its mainland China territory in the Chinese Civil War and fled to Taiwan in 1949."

      Don't you feel it sounds strange? It lost a subject term in this sentence.

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    27. 哇!我疏忽了!!!
      你太神勇了!多謝!!!

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    28. 結果妳老師竟然沒有 catch 到?
      算不上神勇啦

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  2. 算!but~
    你可真是追根究底呀!我把當年上台前交給老師的講稿翻了出來,在家裡練習時,因為時間不夠用,那一段我刪了,相片放上面請過目。還是真心謝謝你
    那堂speech是我第一學期不知天高地厚選的課,後來才知道那老師是全校最嚴格的老師,全班大概80個學生,到期末只有兩個學生拿到A
    一個是我
    嘻~

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    1. 那妳還真走狗史運呢
      這麼強喔? 真用功

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  3. 才不,我認真考慮過後才刪的
    喜歡的事情我都是全力以赴的

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  4. 所以妳也看出來了
    這是幸運的

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  5. 我刪的原因應該是懶得提歷史
    為什麼

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  6. 原來是誤打誤撞
    做喜歡的事啊

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  7. 現在注意到你近來一直強調我運氣好,老天對我好...

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  8. 所以十幾年了,現在才知道我是光芒四射的幸運之星

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